Archive for the ‘Crime’ Category

When The Waiting Stops and the Writing Begins/ Fire and Ice


2010
06.26

While I wait to discover the fate of my first crime novel (some very encouraging developments so far but nothing concrete yet ) I’ve found it difficult to write. The waiting game is not easy but there is only one way to play it and that is to start work on the next novel. So far I’ve had a number of false starts and I’ve held off because it seemed presumptuous to begin a second novel with the same character- Private Investigator Danny Beck – at the center when the first has yet to be accepted. But the thing is I believe in him, and if I don’t believe in myself and my characters then who will?

There is much more to say about Danny Beck and a new story to explore, but most important of all it’s what I want to write, what I feel excited about and inspired by and its no good embarking on the long haul if you don’t feel fired-up. Which brings me to fire and ice and to volcanoes.

I have decided to open the novel (working title Fire and Ice) against the backdrop of the volcanic eruption beneath the glacier in Iceland, at the point at which it brings european air space to a standstill. This decision has sparked off a whole train of ideas and I have since been playing with the properties of fire and ice, both physical and metaphorical.

I like to have abstract themes underneath of what I write, for me this is one of the more playful aspects of writing. Today I have been thinking about which of my characters are fire: hot-headed, quick, angry and which ice: emotionally detached, slippery, lethal which of course applies to both elements. But more importantly I have been writing and sketching out the first ten chapters- and all of this is where the joy and pleasure of writing reside – and not in the waiting.

Writing Tip - What will it be about? I have learned that it’s a very useful exercise to write down in a matter of sentences and certainly no more than a paragraph what your novel is about – you can do this at any stage of the writing, it is always useful. It is not as easy as it sounds. It is not about telling the story but about capturing the essence, its heart, more like the blurb you read on the back of published novels. For instance I might begin – Fire and Ice is about one man’s quest for justice…

You need to be able to do this because if you don’t know what the  novel is about how can you expect your reader to know.

Discovering John Harvey


2010
06.22

I have a confession to make – this year, on the recommendation of a friend, I discovered John Harvey – a little late I hear you say – or maybe not? Maybe like me you’ve come more recently to crime fiction and have yet to read him in which case you are in for a treat. While I was in France I read Lonely Hearts, the first in the Charlie Resnick series and I fell in love with the man, and of course with his three cats: Dizzy, Miles and Pepper. Dizzy, by the way, is a hooligan who if he were human Resnick suspects  would ‘spend days meandering drunkenly around shopping centres,’ splashing  ‘through municipal fountains with a red and white scarf dangling from his belt.’

So what’s so good about John Harvey? In the first place there’s the writing itself: elegant and witty, Harvey paints a rich canvas, making us see everything. It’s a visual treat. Then there are the characters: beautifully drawn especially Charlie Resnick, a man who cares about victims, about those on the bottom of the heap and a man who cares about women. Charlie Resnick likes women! Place is here too and the whole is deliciously downbeat – definitely my kind of music!

John Harvey loves Jazz that’s his kind of music and he’s a poet too. His 1998 collection Bluer Than This which I’ve just started reading shows the influence of jazz and painting on his writing – Roland Kirk, Chet Baker, Edward Hopper, Pierre Bonnard. The poems are tender, about love and loss, straight from the heart – my kind of poems too!

One last thing – John Harvey blogs. YES! This  seems to me to make him instantly inclusive – inviting as it does comment and dialogue. He’s not too grand despite being the Master of British Crime – just can’t believe it’s taken me so long to find him.

The Writing Game


2010
05.31

Tomorrow nights Writing Game features a not to be missed conversation with crime writer Ann Cleeves  recorded when Wendy and I met up with her at the Hexham Book Festival. The Writing Game is broadcast on 105.9  FM at 7pm – 8pm and should be available as a podcast within a day or two at the Bishop FM website.Inspiring for both writers and readers – do tune in!

Eighty Nine Going on Twenty Nine..


2010
05.06

P.D.James is eighty nine, soon to be ninety. At the Hexham Book Festival last Sunday you could be forgiven for thinking she was twenty years younger …or more! She was simply fabulous, as was her host Val Mcdermid, and their on stage meeting  sparkled with good humour and wit. Their conversation was littered with gems about writing and the writing life. Val McDermid had undoubtedly done her homework, and together they made it seem effortless and above all – fun! It was a privilege to eavesdrop.

At Hexham I also talked with crime writer Ann Cleeves, who I knew in another life, in prison. It was great to meet up with her after a long gap in which she has become a star! She is as she always was, a brilliant and dedicated writer and a lovely person to know and be around. She also said some interesting and perceptive things about writing crime fiction which chimed with P.D. James earlier in the day – in particular they both spoke about structure and plot in the crime novel, as a liberating rather than constraining force: as something that looked after itself.

Being new to the genre I’d worried a great deal about coming up with a plausible and complex plot – it had seemed like venturing into unknown and hostile territory (although of course we are hard wired into the genre, if not from our reading, then from film and television.) Then when I’d finished the first draft of my novel I wondered why it  felt so easy and relaxed to write– I think now I know. I think as Ann said, ‘the plot takes care of itself.’

AND I  love what P.D. James says in, Talking About Detective Fiction – a must-read for crime aficiandos-  ‘To say that one cannot produce  a good novel within the discipline of a formal structure is as foolish as to say that no sonnet can be great poetry…’

*** To read more about the day and about Ann Cleeves’  interview on The Writing Game - read Wendy’s great post at Lifetwicetasted.

Why Crime Fiction?


2010
04.30

L'Herault, Agde, taken during my stay last year - I was very sad to leave - see left under Inspiration- for my poem

Last year, during two hot months in France I wrote the first draft of my new (now completed) novel about a Private Investigator.

Until then I had not anticipated writing crime fiction and there are times still when I find myself surprised by this turn of events in my writing life. Times when I ask myself – why crime fiction?

I think this P.D. James quote goes a long way to answering my question – she says ‘I learned a lot from Dorothy Sayers, I think. I learned that it’s important to write well. She was a good writer. I learned…that you can use  a detective story…to say something true, or something you really believe in – and to illumine contemporary life.’

A number of crime writers I admire, Henning Mankell for one, have said something similar: that moving into crime fiction was the means for them of exploring  social issues and moral dilemmas.

Ian Rankin, defender of the genre says ‘…the best crime fiction today is actually talking to us about the same things big literary novels are talking about. They are talking about moral questions, taking ordinary people and putting them in extraordinary situations, and saying to the reader, “How would you cope in this situation?” Or saying, “How would you feel about living in a world in which this these crimes are allowed to happen?” I don’t see a distinction between the two. I think some of the best crime fiction is literature. And some of the best literature is crime fiction.’

I’m inclined to agree – after all a good novel is a good novel is a ….and for me, crime fiction, is most definitely the  place in which I can explore the darker aspects of  the world I live in, including the lives of many of the women I worked with in prison, while at the same time doing what I enjoy most – writing.

And writing my crime novel was probably the most fun I’ve had in my writing life to date!

Looking forward very much to 11.00 am Sunday and P.D. James interviewed by Val McDermid at the Hexham Book festival (now sold out)

The Girl With The Dragon Tattoo – breaking the rules…


2010
04.22

I have just finished reading Steig Larsson’s The Girl With The Dragon Tattoo. In Swedish its original title was Men Who Hate Women – not such a good title – but one that confirms he was a man after my own heart, very much concerned with the problems of violence against women.*  The book is a great read in parts, although interestingly, far from perfect.

The beginning is too slow and too complex, sometimes resulting in readers giving up (as I did on my first attempt) – the family connections and complexities are difficult to follow, too many names, at times too much information, the end like the beginning is too protracted, but for all that the heart of the novel fizzes like a stick of dynamite between the two.

As an aspiring crime writer I wonder what can I learn from this novel? It isn’t a page turner, pace is very slow at the outset and it takes half the novel before financial journalist and free lance private investigator Mikael Blomkvist discovers the first clue to the disappearance of Harriet Vanger, or before his story connects with the second party in this classic duo – Lisbeth Salander.

It isn’t as strong as it might be on atmosphere or place but it is strong on plot, giving a new twist to the old fashioned ‘locked room mystery in island format,’ (Blomkvist’s words)  and making a number of direct references to Larsson’s literary heroines, including; Agatha Christie, Dorothy Sayers and Val McDermid.

But what really makes the whole thing work are the protagonists, compelling and complex characters, in particular the eponymous heroine – Lisbeth Salander – a damaged and vulnerable individual. We care about her, we want to know what happens to this twenty four year old, anorexic, computer hacker, with a photographic memory, a goth like appearance, multiple piercings, tattoos and an unexplained past… need I say more?

Mikael Blomkvist is equally sympathetically drawn, if less obviously so. He has, one suspects, many of the characteristics of Larsson himself and he suffers the classic failed marriage and doubts about his parenting abilities. I found him very attractive.

And I find the success of this novel very heartening – it just goes to show you can break some of the rules and get away with it – and it doesn’t, or we as writers don’t, have to be perfect!

* I really can’t agree with those who charge Larsson with misogyny. Whist the violence against women depicted in the book is explicit, it is never graphic, although I understand the film is quite different .

‘Stieg Larsson (1954-2004) grew up in the Swedish coastal town of Umea and was a graphic designer before becoming a journalist and leading investigator of far-right political groups. He founded and edited the left-wing magazine Expo, and wrote crime novels in the evenings to relax. He presented his publisher with three novels in 2004 before he died. In 2008, he was the second best-selling author in the world, after Khaled Hosseini, author of The Kite Runner. In Britain, Larsson is published by the independent Quercus, whose dedicated staff could be found in the early days handing out copies to bookish strangers in parks’  Iain Hollingshead –The Telegraph.